writing

hi, this is just some of my stories. so read them at tell me what you think.

cave I was alone. I was scared. I could not think What was going to happen. I heard a voice. It sent a shiver down my spine like a ghost walking over my grave. I heard it again it was a not so friendly voice

I walked deeper into the cave wondering what would happen if I come a cross it .I was thinking that if it eats me I will have a slow and painful death. What’s going to happen I whispered to myself.

The cave was darker than the inside of a Bull. I was staving I thought I was going to die of hunger.

I was cold, but as I walked deeper in to the cave I got so warm I though I was on fire and that was because I was on fire!!! So as soon as I knew I was on fire I stopped dropped and rolled .’’oh no my torch, great now I have no light!’’

I sat down next to a rock to look in my bag. When I looked at it i was shocked to see my bag had been changed into a first aid kit.

I walked deeper into the cave. I had to sit down again I felt like I was going to faint. My legs went numb and I fell down onto the rock floor, I closed my eyes falling into a sweet dream as I slowly started to die…